The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
Your story had a good message, but if I was asked to tell someone what it was about, I would tell them - witnessing to people. While I do believe that is the most important thing any of us Christians can do, I felt the topic of "summer" was missed. It is extremely important to proof and re-proof a story before submitting, as well. Other than I think your story missed the topic, I think it had a wonderful message. I tell you all these things because I would want to be told if it was my story. Thank you for sharing.
07/18/09
thank you I enjoyed this and I enjoyed the description of the two youngsters having fun and telling others about Jesus.It was spoilt slightly by the number of spelling errors.But this can be fixed either by proof reading carefully yourself or getting someone eagle eyed to help you. Content is the main thing and your ideas are good. I look forward to more of your work .