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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Retreat (as in quiet time away) (08/01/05)

TITLE: Grease Lightning!
By Penny Baldwin
08/07/05


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Oh no!
Mind out!
What do you think you are doing?
Mind my fender!
Ow!
Oh no!
I don’t want to go there!
That is a bit better

Whoa!
Not so fast!
This is not what I had in mind!
Can’t I just stop here?

I am not sure
I wanted to be
Quite so high!
This is a view
I do not enjoy!

I certainly
Do not like
Being nose to fender
Oh!
That is a bit dangerous!
Do you not think so?

Do you really have to cheer?
When I bash my fender
At the rear

There is a place
I dream to be
With the one
Who is caring for me?

A new paint job
I desire
A smoothing cream
Mixed with
A brilliant snazzy sheen

My headlights would be gleaming
My alloy wheels
My Maker would be preening

Like grease lightning
I would go
Dashing about
To and thro

To spend more time with my maker
I need to be
Giving me
All I need
To get through
All the crashes
All the bangs
That life throws
As time goes by


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Debra Brand08/08/05
Good message in fun rhyme!
Shari Armstrong 08/09/05
Creative entry - nicely done.
Phyllis Inniss 08/10/05
Quite a new approach to the subject.
Lynda Lee Schab 08/11/05
This would have been a great entry for "car trip." :-) Fun poem. Nicely done.
Blessings, Lynda
dub W08/11/05
Bravo - very creative - have read this numerous times. Thanks.
Shannon Redmon08/11/05
Cute poem and point of view!
Linda Watson Owen08/11/05
I was putting the brakes on all the way! Haha! Really cute!
Suzanne R08/12/05
This is great! I love it.


   
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