The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/09
This was a fun story which brought me down memory lane. I loved when one of the girls picked up the phone and it was being used. I came from that era when we had "party lines." This story kept the reader's attention throughout and was a fun read. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Laura
07/18/09
I liked this story but not being a UK reader I was confused of the age of the children. They seemed to be around 10 years old from thier vocab and behaviour but I kinda thought second grade was younger. be kind to your readers and remember some are from other places and add a few clues! Maybe I am the only one :-(
07/18/09
sorry my comment should have read "being a UK reader" not the other way round!!
07/21/09
Your piece captured the children's speech and feelings well. Sweet and believable!