The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
I could see and feel the gifts of God as you described them so beautifully in this. It made my heart swell with praise and the last line was so profound. How exquisite to know, really know, that He adores us. What greater Love is this. Blessings to you and thank you for sharing.
07/17/09
Beautifully written and so true!
07/18/09
thank you some lovely thoughts and descriptions in this poem. Just a couple of suggestions. As you decided to divide the poem into four line verses I expected to see some ryhming pattern with free verse like this my view is that it can work just as well with in a more irregular spacing and collecting togetheer the ideas/themes to make the verses. Others may dissagree and like neatness but maybe give it a try and see how you find it!