The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the homey, down-to-earth feel of this story. It reminded me of some of my own summer memories. I did notice, however, there are words where you have separated them which I am sure was a mere oversight; i.e., enjoy ed. If you use your spell check, that should pick up those kinds of errors. I am curious, as well, as to why the exclamation marks at the end of your story are not flush up against the last word, but instead have a space or two between. Yes, it is a real challenge to get kids to get out and do something other than watch TV or use all the electronic gadgets available to them. Blessings to you, Laura
Sweet memories of yesterday and the challenges of today. What a difference, eh? Nice work.
i liked the summers past description but was confused as to whether you were describing two locations. Some spacing between the paragraphs would help. This is a lovely peice and you are doing well. my comments are just to help you rather than meaning to be negative. I look forward to reading more of your memories.