The Official Writing Challenge
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The vivid descriptions draws the reader into the saddness. Good job conveying this emotion.
very well written
Oh . . . my, oh my. I love your sweet, short tale showing the wanes and woes of how this lady's life goes. Your skills exceeded making me sympathize with her; you made me empathize with her. I wanted to know much more about her, thanks to your portrayal. What descriptive talent you have! Thank you, for the pleasure of the read. Bryan. 14Jul09Tue.
Good descriptive writing. I can feel the sense of melancholy.