The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/09
Wow, this is deliciously good.Should have more good comments at this stage - have you tried the hinting that's on the message board. Give those people in there a hint to read your good piece.
07/14/09
a good peice lovely rich descriptions- so many good peices in the beginiers section this week!
07/17/09
Beautiful contemplative writing that encompasses so much of life's pains and joys.
I felt that your piece wandered a little in the middle and I wasn't entirely sure where you were going. As such in terms of the Challenge ratings it may have dropped a few points here. But that notwithstanding a beautiful composition.