The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/09
Very nice descriptions here. You did a nice job of painting this picture for us.

I would have loved to have heard more - maybe some more detail about how John reacted to Mr. Elliot and his kids, or some interaction with all of them. Don't be afraid to add more detail in these articles - you can use up to 750 words, after all :D

Really enjoyed this piece - and I love that John listened for this every day.