The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/09
You absolutely put me there. Your descriptions, especially toward the beginning of this, were quite vivid. Would have loved some more description toward the end, but the word count can hold us back that way sometimes, can't it?
Very nicely done.
What a wonderful story, and I enjoyed the interaction between the two at the end.
I'm sorry for not being able to leave a comment earlier. Something was wrong with my comment page. I sent you a PM from the message boards, I hope it went to you.

Anyway, I enjoyed the read. You handled the boy's question well, and her memories of times with her husband.
A really sweet story. I love seeing the gen. gap bridged with the very old and the very young becoming friendly companions. Nice writing.

Blessings,
Patty
07/20/09
A very sweet story. Well written. The message came across well. Thanks!