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07/11/09
Very vivid descriptions and interior monologue. Great title too - very fitting for this piece! I found the end a touch stereotypical, but you certainly got your message across. Nicely done.
07/13/09
Nicely done internal monologue. I especially liked the part where the MC was smiling internally, and thought the others might not seem so sad, if they could only know that. Some good thoughts here.
Right on topic and very thoughtful. I enjoyed reading this.
07/14/09
Thought provoking look at the final days/hours of life.
Enjoyed reading it.