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07/11/09
Very vivid descriptions and interior monologue. Great title too - very fitting for this piece! I found the end a touch stereotypical, but you certainly got your message across. Nicely done.
07/13/09
Nicely done internal monologue. I especially liked the part where the MC was smiling internally, and thought the others might not seem so sad, if they could only know that. Some good thoughts here.
07/13/09
Right on topic and very thoughtful. I enjoyed reading this.
07/14/09
Thought provoking look at the final days/hours of life.
Enjoyed reading it.