The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great story and the end made me smile. Love it!
I like your MC's idea - don't go quietly into the night. A very nice piece of writing.
I love it! Suddenly we were up there with you, ready for a new scenario of energy and anticipating serving God in new ways. Gravity-defying stuff, in more ways than one!
A very nice read, reminding me of Caleb who at the age of 85 was able to say he is as strong as he was 45 years ago (Joshua 14:10-11). I can visualize the energy bursting out from the MC in your story!
I envy your writing style!
Thumbs up.
Wow--I loved the attitude of your MC. This was enlightening, fun, entertaining and creative--so it's easy to see why you placed 2nd with this story. Congratulations!
This is how I want to go. It's also how I want to write. Very nice piece, just right in all respects.
Congratulations on your win, Matt. Not only 2nd Place in Level 1, but you also made it into the highest rankings, placing 30th overall. An excellent result for a Level 1 entrant.

Time to move up to Level 2 now.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

Keep up the great writing. Deb (Challenge Coordinator)