The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great story and the end made me smile. Love it!
I like your MC's idea - don't go quietly into the night. A very nice piece of writing.
07/14/09
I love it! Suddenly we were up there with you, ready for a new scenario of energy and anticipating serving God in new ways. Gravity-defying stuff, in more ways than one!
07/15/09
A very nice read, reminding me of Caleb who at the age of 85 was able to say he is as strong as he was 45 years ago (Joshua 14:10-11). I can visualize the energy bursting out from the MC in your story!
07/15/09
I envy your writing style!
Thumbs up.
07/16/09
Wow--I loved the attitude of your MC. This was enlightening, fun, entertaining and creative--so it's easy to see why you placed 2nd with this story. Congratulations!
This is how I want to go. It's also how I want to write. Very nice piece, just right in all respects.
07/18/09
Congratulations on your win, Matt. Not only 2nd Place in Level 1, but you also made it into the highest rankings, placing 30th overall. An excellent result for a Level 1 entrant.

Time to move up to Level 2 now.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=26236

Keep up the great writing. Deb (Challenge Coordinator)