The Official Writing Challenge
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This piece has many lovely elements, though I am not sure of your use of some of the words in their context I felt the beautiful spirit of this article and enjoyed reading it.
This has a sweetness to it I enjoyed.
is the first line a quote? i found I got a bit lost in places and could not quite follow your thread.But keep on going. sorry I cant be more constructive