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08/08/05
Saved by God's bell, Thankfully God's power in him was stronger than the seducer's. Good entry.
08/08/05
Flee from temptation! Good thing God gives us a conscience. Good example.
08/11/05
Very interesting, the construction not withstanding, the story kept my attention.
Good story. Would like to hear more dialog between MC and God, MC and girl, MC and himself. Nice entry.
08/12/05
A very interseting story - and a good lesson. One thing, just space the paragraphs for an easier read :)
A good commentary on conviction and temptation. Try watching for formatting glitches, and space your paragraphs for a more comfortable read. Glad the young man came to his senses in time!!!
02/27/06
That is a very honest story, and one that teaches us lessons also. Glad the story ended with him realizing what was happening, how the devil practices to decieve. God bless ya, littlelight