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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Twilight Years of Life (07/02/09)

TITLE: Twilight? (i)
By Margaret Villanueva
07/03/09


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My children are grown and gone. They have lives and families of their own. Do I feel neglected and alone? Not at all! My own life has beauty and merit enough for me. I hop on my motorcycle (actually a Honda scooter) and go to the mountains for my daily hike. Do I get lonely? Sometimes, sure, but I have learned to savor aloneness. My husband, gone these 25 years, had learned that skill well. He enjoyed fishing, working in the garage, taking long walks, and seeing the beauty in little things. I didn’t learn these skills until long after he was gone, but I did finally learn them.

My scooter putt-putts its way to the entrance to the Sabino Canyon National Park. I never thought that I’d enjoy living in the desert, but I do. I love the desert lifestyle. I no longer dye my hair or wear makeup. I’ve become one of those “nature grannies” that I used to make fun of! But I long ago decided that grey is a perfectly nice color for my hair. It suits me. My mother-in-law used to say “Las canas te sirven”—Grey hair does you well. I agree. I sometimes look in the mirror and see a battle-hardened old woman, wrinkled and worn, but smiling and proud to be who she is. It is never too late to realize that you are what the years have made of you, and my years have made me strong and self-reliant.

Walking along the beautiful canyon, I look to my left and right. Some people would see nothing but shrubs and cacti, with jutting facades of stone enclosing you like a cage. I have learned to see the beauty in the majestic Saguaros. It takes thirty years for a Saguaro cactus to go from a barrel-shape to the cactus that we know from Road Runner cartoons—the green arms pointing up to God. I sometimes see myself as a Saguaro. It took me many years to reach up to God, but I can’t imagine not doing so now. I pat the water bottle in its holster on my belt and smile. God and water—what else do I need? Beauty, joy, and love—and I find all these in the Lord.

My hike finished, I hop on the scooter and putt-putt home. My Pug dog and grey cat wait for me, and I am content. I think back to the girl that I once was. I was never considered beautiful, and that wounded me. However, one man saw the beauty that lay beneath, and he married me. He died much too soon and left me alone—even with a houseful of children, you are never so alone as in those months and years following the death of a spouse. But year followed year, and I learned to cope. Coping with solitude slowly turned to loving independence. Today, I can’t imagine having someone else in my life day after day, sharing decisions and compromising on plans. I am glad for the others in my circle that are two, but I am happy being one.

Today I will go to church and work with the committee that I chair—Living the Twilight Years. We are a group of women and men—some as young as 55, others in their 80s, one who is proud to make it to 95—who are in different stages of learning that there is still life after retirement. We work together as a team to share and enjoy what gifts God has given us. We help those who are dismayed to find that they didn’t plan prudently for retirement. We grieve with those whose family has been reduced through death. We exult with those who find new roads to travel in these years—we have many budding authors and artists in our midst. Our committee is working up a schedule for the coming year. I get excited just thinking about it—art exhibits, trips to Mexico to help build houses, a weekend getaway to San Diego, a trip to Los Angeles to see a musical at the Pantages. The list goes on and on, and we help those whose income doesn’t allow for this type of entertainment. My twilight years aren’t what I’d hoped they’d be as a young girl—growing old together with a wonderful man and doting grandchildren on my knee, but they’re my golden years, and I relish them.


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Sara Harricharan 07/09/09
I like this "nature granny" she's got spunk and a good outlook on life that will last her. You did great with the backstory, by not dumping it out that she was a widow and alone mostly, but it was handled very well. Nice job.
Donna Emery07/09/09
Go granny! She reminds me of an aunt who went to heaven. You definitely gave us a clear and engaging picture of this wonderful lady. Good job!
Verna Mull07/09/09
I like the attitude. Things seldom go the way we dream, but much of it is even better, because God does all things well! Good job
diana kay07/15/09
good descriptive content. Remember to try and think of as title for your peice rather than using the theme. This will make it stand out from the others and entice people to read your good writing.
Lisa Johnson 07/16/09
Congratulations on your first place win. I also liked the term "nature granny".
Lisa
Charla Diehl 07/16/09
Congratulations on your EC achievement--first place! This was an inspiring read for anyone of any age. Good descriptions throughout this piece made it an enjoyable read.

Sabino Canyon was a favorite hiking place for my daughter when she lived in AZ--so I've seen the beauty you described.
Joy Faire Stewart07/16/09
Congratulations on your 1st place win!
Deborah Porter 07/18/09
Congratulations on your excellent win, Margaret. Not only 1st Place in Level 1, but you also made it into the highest rankings, placing 23rd overall. A fantastic result for a Level 1 entrant.

Time to move up to Level 2 now.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=26236

Keep up the great writing. Deb (Challenge Coordinator)