The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
This was pretty good, it started out well, but the very last paragraph seemed too, um, cliche? I already understood that Elaine had "gotten" it without her having to explain that it was the little things that mattered-your dialog already told the reader that, so it was kind of obvious, otherwise, pretty good read. I loved the descriptions about her life and the atmosphere you worked in.
07/09/09
This was nicely written and it reminded us to keep the things of God in the forefront of our lives.
07/10/09
I enjoyed this, especially the verse about doing all things as unto the Lord. Life changes all the time, and finding ourselves in different stages (and ages) is a challenge to our priorities.. I like your message.
07/15/09
I enjoyed this story very much. I think I would have liked it even more if there had been a little more dialogue. I'm a Beginner as well, and I'm amazed at the talent in that group. You certainly are one of those people. Thank you for a lovely read. Laura