The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
Indeed, there are many special miracles that God sprinkles throughout our lives, sometimes it seems as if we truly don't deserve them and sometimes we crave them. Good thoughts.
07/09/09
You definitely reminded us of our first priority. You might have included a few more twilight-specific experiences, but it was clearly written and easy to understand.
07/09/09
I'm sure there is a little typo in the word (trouble) I am the queen of typo's however!:) A very good article. Truly enjoyed it!
07/14/09
Though I found this to be a little light on the topic, I liked the message conveyed. With a little editing and a reduction of the over used word "life", this could be a great testimony.
07/15/09
Your story gave me cause to think about my life - where I've been and where I'm going. I recognized a lot of repetition and more than one typo. When I get ready to hit that "submit" button, I personally panic. Did I remember this or do I have a typo? I can't stress enough in any writing, the importance of a good, clean, typo-free product. Excellent message in this story. Keep writing! Blessings to you. Laura