The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
Very interesting thoughts shared in this piece. You picked a good format to showcase it. My only note is one typo-in the second line of the verses, "was" would make more sense if changed to "were". Thank you for sharing this.
07/09/09
Very intriguing view of life and death. I really was confused for a bit, but you straightened us out very well.
07/09/09
This is very thought provoking and very well written. It seems you put a lot of thought in to this. It is excellent!
The first paragraph had me a bit confused, however, I've been learning that in God, most--if not all--things are inverted from their right state.

Well done.
07/14/09
All I can say is WOW. Very well written and makes you really think about life and death. thanks
07/14/09
From a first glance it looked like going from 'sad to verse," but your descriptions stirred me to recall that God always has a bigger picture beyond any impossible barrier. Thanks for the positive challenge.
07/15/09
All I can say is...excellent! It would seem you put a great deal of effort into this piece - it shows. In the fourth verse of the poem, I believe when you said "knows," you meant "know." Very good! Laura