The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
Very true to the challenge title.
08/09/05
This article is truly worth reading, if only for the truths in it. But you have managed to express this with a feeling of appreciation for the 'gift' that He has bestowed on us. Thanks for sharing.
08/11/05
Lose the second person and get rid of the exclamation marks, and find a peer editor. You have a message to share, with a little work it could go far.
Would love to hear more about the camp where you learned about retreating!
Thanks for sharing.
08/12/05
An interesting reflection on retreats. Just my preferance, I'd reword this “Retreat ...HELL!!! We just GOT here!” The h*** seems out of place.
Thanks for the encouragement to "do it!" Liked this: "TAKE the gift...Enjoy it...Embrace it as you would a handful of dandelions from your two year old boy. Weep if you must...knowing that you don’t deserve this honor. The father loves a humble and contrite heart."