The Official Writing Challenge
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Very true to the challenge title.
This article is truly worth reading, if only for the truths in it. But you have managed to express this with a feeling of appreciation for the 'gift' that He has bestowed on us. Thanks for sharing.
Lose the second person and get rid of the exclamation marks, and find a peer editor. You have a message to share, with a little work it could go far.
Would love to hear more about the camp where you learned about retreating!
Thanks for sharing.
An interesting reflection on retreats. Just my preferance, I'd reword this “Retreat ...HELL!!! We just GOT here!” The h*** seems out of place.
Thanks for the encouragement to "do it!" Liked this: "TAKE the gift...Enjoy it...Embrace it as you would a handful of dandelions from your two year old boy. Weep if you must...knowing that you don’t deserve this honor. The father loves a humble and contrite heart."