The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/09
Lots of spiritual tidbits here! Loved the willingness of the poor preacher.

Just a hint... paragraph breaks would make the reading much easier and smoother. :) Watch out for verb tenses - I noticed a mix of present and past.

The last paragraph threw me a little. It seemed to be another thought all on its own. I hope that the MC never gives up hope, always remembering that God is bigger than what we can see.

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