The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/09
My favorite line was:

"...equally established is another reality that the road taken to reach the goal of fullness, at times, leads to emptiness."

How ironic and true. If only the world would see that filling up with man's pleasures leads to nothing in the end.

You drew out several different perspectives for the same topic (two different women, and in the end, the parallel of filled tires). I could see this split into several individual devotionals.

Keep an eye out for little spelling errors or words that don't belong. (Reading aloud might help!)

Overall good job. I liked it very much. :)