The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story has good bones. I found it interesting. A few typos here and there. I thought your MC is real. Felt her pain.
I agree - a brush up in English would be helpful. This piece is made beautiful in its simplicity, so better that the simplicity comes from a choice in technique. Yes, definitely the "bones" are there and you don't want errors to detract....