The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/09
I felt so very bad for your MC. I know first-hand how families can be torn apart, and the emptiness of heart is real.

I loved the ending, how she allowed God to begin her healing, filling up her heart with HIM instead of her own plans.

A sad but warming piece. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
06/17/09
I love the title...it fits. You have the ability to tell a story. Your writing touched me and I look forward to more from you.
Mona