The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/09
Are these children's stories? If so, they are a nice quick telling of two familiar Bible stories. If you intended an older audience, you could have picked one of them and put in more detail.
06/16/09
Stories like these can't be retold too may times! :)

Look out for typos. ;) Consider putting the MC's thoughts in quotes or italics.

Thanks for writing and sharing!