The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story with a couple of surprises. But I'm a little confused about the narrator's dialogue. I suppose English isn't his native language, but even so, some of the things he said could have been clearer.
I think the part I liked the most was the picture in my mind, created of your MC's eyes when he spoke to his wife. They sparkled with enthusiasm for the mission, with delight for being able to share this message, with amusement for the look on his wife's face that begged an explanation, and with love for both Sara and the mission field. If only more people would realize that empty can be full.