The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/09
Oh, what a sweet story! Always love a happy ending. :)

You might polish up the punctuation and capitalization with the dialogue just a bit. Such as: "I'm here," he said.
Rather than: "I'm here." He said.

I want to know what happened next in the story! Good job.