The Official Writing Challenge
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The question you raise regarding the extremeties of life, is an interesting one to ponder. Just a suggestion, but I would create more white space between paragraphs for an easier read, and to make each new thought stand out. This is quite a unique take on the topic.
06/16/09
A thought-provoking read. My favorite line was, "The blanks of a room are created and left to the desire of a personís heart..." Much like a blank piece of paper can come alive through our imagination.

You might consider breaking down a few of the longer sentences for a smoother flow. I felt myself wanting to know what some of the precious memories were in the first section. I wanted to see and feel more about it.

Keep it up! Good job. :)