The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
Very nice poetry.
08/11/05
Your "haven of Rest in Christ" nothing disturbs. Your poem speaks of tranquillity with an inner joy. Very refreshing.
08/11/05
The message is okay, but the meter is distracting - a few poetic adjustments and it will work.
08/11/05
This poem makes me appreciate the little 'retreats' in my life.
08/12/05
Sounds just about perfect :)