The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
Oh my! I almost cried. I have two girls, and I think one day I'll have to let them go, but that is not for a long time now. I will make the best of what time I have! Thank you for sharing this.
06/11/09
A good story but I didnt get a feel for the bitter sweet theme somehow. I loved your descriptions and could picture the scene