The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
I am so glad I am the first to comment on this. What an excellent way to describe the love of God! Thank you for sharing this!
06/11/09
well well done with the twist! I knew it was the few minutes before the execution of the prisoner but clear about the reversal! I think it would have been even better if you had not started with a longer monologue from larson at the begining becauese the convosation was short and brisk thereafter!
07/03/09
Wow...I thought Sara was the guard...not the prisoner...great twist. I did not see that coming. Great method to show God's love for us.

Thanks by the way for your kind words about my story.
Lisa