The Official Writing Challenge
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A strong conviction to succeed indeed! Through God's strength. Very keen thoughts and pursuits.

Check on your spelling and punctuation marks; some editing needed there. A little polish on the meter of your piece will smooth it out for the reader.

Good article and attitude!
i love the "life is a mountain but I am born to climb"
" I was born to climb.
Don't move the mountain, God's joy is my strength.
I'll climb to the top no matter what the length. "

some very good phrases in here. I think you might find it works smoother if you split the lines in half in most of them and to try some divisons into verses.
I enjoyed reading this and think it is an original idea