The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
I liked this! That's the way it goes sometimes. Great story!
08/08/05
Sometimes the grass is not always greener. I love your story...great job.
Great story written with much humour. You retreated into a more peaceful home than the one you went on. Good writing skills.
08/11/05
Loved it, loved it, loved it. Bravo!
08/11/05
AWESOME! OH! WHat a joy out of this one, I got tickle about the cookie crumb and the mouse.
FUNNY!
08/11/05
Oh what a joy I got out of this one! Thanks for sharing.
08/11/05
A wonderful winning entry! Well done!
08/12/05
Home sweet home :) Enjoyed the humor and irony.
08/12/05
You described my day. Being a writer is not always about the writing. Great use of descriptive words and phrases, epecially in the 10th paragraph.
I liked this. Thanks for sharing.
This is real life, isn't it? We look and look...and then find the prize right under our noses. :-)

Enjoyed this immensely. Good description, good flow, good point.