The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
Although it is painful to read, it is a wonderful story of bitter and sweet. Thanks for sharing this. Your writing is easy to read.
06/10/09
Thank you for this reminder that God is never late in doing his works of mercy. It is never too late for Him to save a marriage!
06/11/09
Your story brought back memories for me. You did a great job of describing what that situation feels like. The heartbreak of a cancer diagnosis is softened somewhat when God is in the equation isn't it?
06/11/09
good peice. Giving the person a name would be good, it wouldmean not so many "she" and make her more real or to write the whole peice in the first person. . you start with a question and I think that maybe should be in speech marks. Thatks for writing this