The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
Although it is painful to read, it is a wonderful story of bitter and sweet. Thanks for sharing this. Your writing is easy to read.
Thank you for this reminder that God is never late in doing his works of mercy. It is never too late for Him to save a marriage!
06/11/09
Your story brought back memories for me. You did a great job of describing what that situation feels like. The heartbreak of a cancer diagnosis is softened somewhat when God is in the equation isn't it?
06/11/09
good peice. Giving the person a name would be good, it wouldmean not so many "she" and make her more real or to write the whole peice in the first person. . you start with a question and I think that maybe should be in speech marks. Thatks for writing this