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What wonderful memories you have of your mother! Thank you for sharing them.

A very nice article, and touching it up with some spell-checking and sentence structure will smooth out the wrinkles. Keep writing!
What a completely 'real' composition. I love its simplicity and depth as well as its openess and honesty.

It would be an easier read on the eyes if you left some spaces between your paragraphs.

Lovely tribute to your mom. Keep writing.
Oh how lovely! such a tender loving peice of writing.well done