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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Bitter and Sweet (05/28/09)

TITLE: My Love
By Aletha Ng
06/03/09


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MY LOVE

How I think of you so often. Of the times that we shared together.
Of the fights we had, of the love we shared.
I think of the tears we shed together, of the nights we held each other.
Often we said things or did things without thinking of how it would affect the other.
Apologies, sometimes were left unsaid. We just assumed that our love would cover the faults. We would always be there for each other. God had other plans. He decided it was time for us to go our separate ways. I often wonder about things that I could have done differently. Things that I could have said that I did not. I could have talked sweeter. I would have said things that I assumed you already knew. I would not have put things off till tomorrow. God knows we learn from our mistakes. I only wish I could have learned them differently. I have grown. My life goes on. I have bitter sweet memories of you, and I learn to cherish what I have now, more than before. I count my blessings everyday. I try not to speak in anger, words to those I love. I cherish the moments with every fiber of my being, because of life’s lessons. It is so true, life is like a vapor. Time goes by so quickly. It seems like just yesterday I heard your laugh, I saw your smile. How these memories are so bitter sweet. I know that God will use my lose for His Glory. I already see the things that he has worked out of me. Well my love until I see you again, I will cherish my bitter sweet memories.


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Sara Harricharan 06/08/09
Feels like an unwritten letter to a long-ago love. Nicely done, there are some good emotions in here.

Some extra spaces would make for easier reading though, next time you submit, just hit enter, for an extra space after each paragraph. Great job!