The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/09
very good story. I could feel the anger of the MC.

There were a few spelling errors. Using something like Microsoft Word and then spell checking and copy and paste before submission should take care of that.

Really good story, I really wanted to know why Greca took the wine and how he got hurt...
06/10/09
Very interesting story and great unusual take on the prompt. This story begs for more details, but it was an awesome moment. Well done!