The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/09
Nicely written poem praising your daughter's teaching experiences. Cool title!


You need to check your spelling ("their vs there vs they're vs they are") and plurals vs possessive apostrophes.

Yes, we parents feel for our adult children and wish we could stand in for them at times. But, like you wrote, "She grows stronger..." That's good solid knowledge.
06/10/09
Sounds like something a loving father would write about his daughter. I liked it.