The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/09
Yep, we've been there! No reminder needed! :)

In both starts, you use too many pronouns. She...she...she...he...he...

Cinch up some sentences and get to writing... :)
06/08/09
LOL! Who can't relate to this! I certainly know how it goes, try to read it backwards next time. If that doesn't jumpstart a stuck point-I don't know what does. Nice way to tackle the topic!