The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
I love your take on this! Very well written. <3
06/08/09
Love the first paragraph here! I didn't see where you were going with it until I kept reading past that and then it all fell into place. This is very well done. Nice twist.
06/10/09
An interesting take on the topic. A lot of bitterness around the sweet Lord at the Cross - well done - Colin
06/10/09
good title and good story
06/10/09
GREAT application of "bitter/sweet" and showing how with the Lord "all things work together for good" Loved the MC - very real and believable.

06/10/09
Just imagine the emotions they all went through during those days. You speak to it. Makes one think. Good job.
Mona
06/10/09
Oh, I loved the opening paragraph too! I wonder if you could have kept that going for a bit longer...to really zing us farther down on the page. I see some very good characterization in your writing, some great structure too. Good job! Keep Going.
06/10/09
A well-written account of what the disciples must have felt at Jesus' death. Was this Thomas? This was excellent for the topic.
12/03/09
Very well done.