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You have a good rendition here of the Biblical story of Jepththah and his ill-spoken promise to God. What a tragic result for such a sweet victory!

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On the whole, a good job retelling this story.
Indeed, a most bittersweet victory. I remember this story too well and you did good to try to show it in poetry form. Nicely done.
gosh well done !a unknown (to me anyway) bible story brought to life