The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/09
Some good scriptural references on bitterness and sweetness. Check out the meaning and standards on the words "who's, whose, and whom". You might need to edit here. Also when using quotes, don't leave a space between them and the following words.

Keep writing and enjoy the art.
06/08/09
Nicely done! I see someone's already beat me to the notation of Bible, always having a captial "B". Good job with this.
06/10/09
try and use a different title from the peice than that of the theme