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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Bitter and Sweet (05/28/09)

TITLE: My Grandmother's Legacy
By Mary Lou Tiner
06/01/09


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My Grandmother’s Legacy


We walked amidst a garden
That was overgrown with weeds
Thistles, thorns and briars
That was all that I could see
But then I turned and saw her smile
And with her firm but gentle style
She pulled the weeds, and made a pile
She worked so tenderly
Suddenly I realized, just what her eyes had seen
For a single rose was blooming there in the midst of the debris
And though her hands were bloody, from the pricking of the thorns
She only saw the beauty that others had ignored.

We walked amidst the city
That was filled with filth and noise
Sirens, crowds and traffic
Blaring horns and screaming boys
But then she stopped there on the spot
She heard something that I had not
She smiled and listened, deep in thought
Her heart was overjoyed
Suddenly I recognized, just what her ears had heard
For there, amidst the chaos sang one small and cheerful bird
And though the world rushed by her, with a loud and empty roar
She softly hummed the music that others had ignored

We walked amidst the shadows
As her day came to an end
Her step had never faltered
As she turned the final bend
She modeled grace and confidence
Her life reflected excellence
The essence of her influence
And legacy won’t end
Now she walks amidst the Garden as she holds her Savior’s Hand
And listens to the singing of Heaven’s Worship Band
She knew that death was not the end, that there was so much more
Because she knew the Savior’s Love, that others had ignored


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Beth B06/05/09
Thanks for sharing your moving poem. I loved it! Reminded me of my dear grandmother.
Joy Faire Stewart06/07/09
This is so beautiful and wonderful message.
Sara Harricharan 06/08/09
A great tribute to the grandmother. I can relate to this. Thanks for sharing!
MELISSA HENDREN06/08/09
This is a magnificent piece of work. The message and the form were very nicely written. Such a beautiful tribute. God Bless!
diana kay06/10/09
lovely poem well done
Maryknoll Claveria Santos06/11/09
What you have written is very beautiful!

I pray for grace that I'd grow in my older years to be like this Godly Grandmother, a life "worthy of the Lord unto all pleasing, being fruitful in every good work,and increasing in the knowledge of God." Col.1:10; (unless our Saviour and King Jesus comes first... smile).

God bless you for writing this tribute and for sharing it to us!

Carol Slider 06/11/09
Thank you for this lovely and deeply personal tribute. I was very close to my Grandmother, so I can relate to this very well. Congratulations!
Beth LaBuff 06/11/09
Your message is beautiful in this exquisitely written poem. Wonderful writing! Congrats on your level placing and your Editor's Choice award!
Rachel Lerch06/11/09
I'm truly speechless. Thank you for writing this. It is excellent. You deserve the award!
Joanne Sher 06/11/09
Absolutely wonderful, and so worthy of placing so high. Congratulations, and I look forward to reading more of your writing. You are very talented.
Deborah Porter 06/12/09
Hi Mary Lou. Congratulations on an excellent win this week. Not only 2nd place in Level 2 (where the competition is always intense) but also 5th place in the Editor's Choice. That's outstanding. The three ladies at the top of the list are the current queens of the Challenge, so you are in very fine company, made even more wonderful by the fact that the 4th place EC winner was also from Level 1.

Of course, this now means it's time to move up to Level 2 (although I suspect you won't be there very long).

Congratulations, and I'm sure we'll be seeing more of you in future lists of winners.

They're celebrating the winners over on the message boards, so if you haven't already been over there, it might be a good time to pop over:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=25854

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August. It’s going to be an amazing time of inspiration, information and encouragement. (If I’ve already mentioned that to you, forgive me. We’re just so excited about letting members know about this great gathering.)
http://www.faithwriters.com/conference.php

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Pat Guy 06/14/09
This was my favorite. It's so worthy of it's place as and Editors Choice. On this level, places are barely .0001 points apart so congratulations on a job more than well done.
Janna Clark06/15/09
Amazing, It made me cry!
Janna Clark :)


   
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