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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Bitter and Sweet (05/28/09)
The gifts for the world, so Gods light can shine through. Lets keep in perspective , it's not about you. Whether poems or stories ,and even a song. They add up to nothing if motives are wrong. They loved your work , and yes you are blessed. But were's the anointing and Gods rightousness. Your work can get published, for all to behold, but don't you lose focus, it's all about souls. One got two talents the other got five. Don,t you get haughty and lifted in pride. Keep your eyes focused , the gift is not yours. Just like it opened, God can shut doors! So write for the kingdom, and tell them the story. Stay straight and narrow for our God is holy. and on that last day he'll say you were fervent, Now enter thy joy my good faithful servant.
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Stacy Wells 
06/04/09
I really liked this. It will step on some toes.

It reads like a poem and would be an easier read if written in stanzas.

Good job.
Aletha Ng
06/04/09
Well said.
Sara Harricharan
06/08/09
Great job! Short and sweet. There are some minor punctuation issues and breaking it into stanzas, (because it seems to read as a poem) might fight the idea more. Good job!