The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/09
I'm still confused about how many children you live with, but I love the dynamics here! Your nieces and nephews seem to be educating their aunt. What excellent interplay between all of you.

This article has a great devotional theme. Why not expand it with more discourse and perhaps some scripture? Keep writing, as you have a definite writer's touch.
06/08/09
This is a lovely opening. I did want to read more, to know about this Aunt and all her different nieces and nephews, this can most definitely be expanded! Great stuff, thanks for sharing!
06/10/09
interesting the split. I think if you could have maybe just described a couple of them in more detail it would have made it more interesting reading