The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/09
An interesting food list, with items that you enjoy being sweet and ones that you do not like are bitter. Is this your way of saying one food is bad and good? It appears that, though you write otherwise, you are a picky eater. Time will probably change your likes and dislikes; it usually does!

This article might make a cute, whimsical poem.
06/08/09
How fun and creative! I know my list of foods is very, um, extensive. LOL! What a fun way to approach the topic. I like it. I especially liked the line with the caramel corn!
06/10/09
I was just thinking this would make a great poem and I see that someone has already suggstd that idea. why not try it? you could have the first verse sweet things are.... and the next about bitter add in a few more and see if you can pair them up to rhyme. Good idea but doesnt read so well as a list as there is too much repitition. In a poem repitionion can work very effectively