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Very very nicely captured the transition from bitter to sweet beautifully and held my attention all the way through. Excellent writing.
Your one-line interjections worked really well in keeping the pace moving. Nicely done.
Outstanding writing--you may well have placed your first entry in the wrong level. This is superb.
This is so realistic, I really felt I was there with her, experiencing her turbulent emotions every step of the way. Exceptional writing! Very, very well done!
Wow... I was right there the whole time. You had me seeing and feeling what you MC was. Excellent.
This is very well written and so on-topic. It has a gripping message of letting go of bitterness, and yet the truth that, humanly speakig, it takes time.
Amazing writing. I couldn't tell if it was fact or fiction. You wrote as though it was you in that attic.
This is so very good. You drew me into your story and I wasn't ready for it to end.