The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/09
Wow! What a life! Great story. Thank you for sharing
06/06/09
An incredible story and what a positive attitude!
I found the change of perspective a bit sudden and wonder whether it wouldn't have worked better keeping everything in Jill's words. Either that or revert back to your narrator for a closing paragraph so as to give the piece a more balanced feel. But even in saying that a lovely piece of rich writing
06/08/09
a lovely story
A fascinating story and so inspirational! I like the way you told it, too. Good writing.
06/10/09
Great story.