The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
You have some interesting and great descriptions in here, that really add some good touches of humor to this piece. I enjoyed the read-thanks for sharing!
06/04/09
Well done! Very descriptive phrases. This was a fun read in spite of the tough subject.
06/09/09
And I'm sure it willbe a good day also. God is so good when we yeild to Him. A very well-written piece.
06/10/09
it is interesting the way you use humour in what is a very tough and painful issue. That seems to make the bitter sweet contrat all the more evident. well done!