The Official Writing Challenge
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A short and sweet piece. Thank you for sharing this.

Oh wow.. great questions! A few punctuation and spelling mistakes that can easily be fixed. Very insightful!
06/09/09
Very Good Devotional! Good thoughts to meditate upon.
06/10/09
I like this very well contracted between your "cross" and that of the centurion. Some more spacing with paragraphs would be good. I just wonder what happened to your little baby, did they survive?