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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Light and Dark (05/21/09)

TITLE: I was, but now I am...
By Larie Norvell
05/28/09


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In the dark, I couldnít see.

In the dark, I didnít know the Way.

I was lost.

In the dark, I fell down.

In the dark, I was scared.

I was dead.

In the dark, I was ignorant.

In the dark, I was dangerous.

I was oppressed.

In the dark, I was chaotic.

In the dark, I was heartrending.

I was picked over.

In the dark, I was left to myself.

In the dark, I was without an agenda.

I was useless.


With the Light, I see God.

With the Light, I know the Way.

I am found!

With the Light, I may stumble, but I stumble into Love.

With the Light, I am confident!

I am alive!

With the Light, I am abundant in wisdom just because I ask without doubt.

With the Light, I am secure.

I am Redeemed!

With the Light, I am in peace.

With the Light, I am inexpressibly joyful!

I am chosen!

With the Light, I am disciplined because I am loved.

With the Light, I am on Time.

I am beneficial. I am His!


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Jan Ackerson 06/02/09
Good parallel structure--I liked this poem.
Yvonne Blake 06/02/09
The repetition is very effective! Well done!
diana kay06/03/09
I like it. It is like a meditation prayer. I could see it with some photographs and it would be very effective. Thank you