The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the approach you took with this. Your story is interesting and caused me to want to read the next line to see where you wold bring in light. I did not think you did in a direct way and was a little disappointed. Still over all a good story.
05/29/09
The absence of darkness IS light. nice.
06/01/09
This is a lovely prayer of praise.
06/04/09
good . I like this